[LaLi17]

Hey guys I am thinking of starting a story in a script style... I am very excited about it lol I hope you will like it... I am not sure when I am exactly going to start maybe somewhere next year lol kidding.. I will just give you a hint how it gona be like.

Characters
Interns
Dr. Riddhima Gupta - Sukirti Kandaple
Dr. Armaan Malik - Karan Grover
Dr. Anjali Gupta - Sunaina Gulia
Dr. Atul Joshi - Pankit Thakkar
Dr. Muskaan Chedda - Drushti Dhumi
Dr. Rahul Garewal - Mayank Anand

Senior
Dr.Shubhankar - Ayaz Khan
Dr.Keerti Mehra - Sonia Singh
Dr. Shashank Gupta - Mohnish Behl

Other Character
Sister Padma - Shilpa Tulaskar

There is already a Drama serial in Star One called Dill Mill Gaye.. its a story about 6 Interns in a Hospital called Sanjeewani, this story I am going to write is my own but based on that... I hope you guys like it please

Do Comment----

This post has been edited by LaliO: 30 March 2009 - 10:35 PM

[- Edward's Bella -]

I can't wait :clap2:

Go Lali :spin:

[LaLi17]

glad that some one is interested lol hehe i hope u will enjoy reading it...
and guys do please comment because that will encourage me to write and do comment lol :P

will let you know more about the casts and character too, some of the hidden question will be answered during the parts :D

[LaLi17]

The story about 6 interns who enter to Sanjeewani 1 and half years ago. They are doctors but still behave like little kids. Doesn’t take much stuff serious and they will be friends and friends forever. The 6 interns are very different to one and another but still best friend. The life in Sanjeewani g through life of birth to death but theses interns bring fun into it.




















Part 1

After a busy night in Sanjeewani the interns decided to go out for bit of masti, before starting work at 6 o'clock in the morning. The 6 interns sit around the table while the background music was on but very low because of the excited interns non stop chatter.
Muskaan and Rahul as always fighting over little stuff like what they want to eat and who is going to read the menu first. Atul and Anjali reading and sharing the menu Anjali looking t the food and Atul on the price. Riddhima very quietly singing along with the background music and looking through the menu and Armaan started a non stop staring at Riddhima. Riddhima notice this and smile uncomfortably toward the rest.

Muskaan - Aare you gona give me the menu or not? Pointing a hair pin toward Rahul

Rahul - if not what laughing you will scratch me? No need, you nails are already sharp... wild cat Rahul said with a laugh while everyone looked shock around the table

Anjali - guys, stop fighting looking up from the menu at Muskaan and Rahul irritated

Atul - Anjali is right you know, guys you're a married couple now, but Rahul why you always like a jerk? Both Muskaan and Atul laugh out loud and gave hi5 and Armaan just snigger at how Rahul going red

Armaan - STOP shout spreading both his hand telling to stop did you guys decide what to eat?

Atul - no yaar, these foods are very expensive

Armaan - no worries, I am paying for it remember? It's a treat from me

Atul - great, then I will order the most expensive food

Anjali - Atul!? By the way Armaan, anything special to give us this treat? Looking around confusedly

Armaan - special? Slowly looking at Riddhima shall I tell them?

Riddhima - Armaan? What? Ridz asked Armaan surprise and confuse

Anjali - how would Ridz know Armaan?

Muskaan - yeas yaar, you gone nuts

Armaan - thanks Muskaan... yes I know smiling at Ridz its nothing. I thought of doing something after a tiring week.

Atul - really my bro, you are gone crazy without even looking at Armaan

Anjali - whatever, Muskaan how is your patient Ranveer doing?

Muskaan - he is great, few tests need to be done.

While everyone else carry on making their own conversations Armaan gestures to Rahul from his eyes saying take them away. When Rahul gestures back to Armaan asking why then he looked at Ridz and understood the situation. He looked at Muskaan but she was very busy having a nice chat with Atul.

Rahul - Anjali, shall we... dance?

Atul - Rahoool! That's my Anjali and your sister in law...

Anjali - hold on, hold on when did I become yours?

Muskaan - Aare Atul is right, you'e my husband and not asking me to dance?

Atul - don't you have any other job to do? Always looking at my Anji and saying you look nice today...

Muskaan - you kill me, you are hot angry face

Rahul - at Muskaan you care about me so much?

Riddhima - it's your wife Rahul

Anjali - stop, shut up! For the last time I am not yours Atul

At this time everyone is up from their seats except Armaan and Riddhima who is giggling

Anjali - and thank you Rahul walk off to the dance floor

Rahul - anytime Anji walk of after Anjali

Muskaan - anytime ke bachche, common Atul lets show them Muskaan walk off holding Atul's hand and literally pulling him

Riddhima get up from where she was sitting and move forward when Armaan stops her from holding her hand and pulling back to her seat and closer to him.

Riddhima - Armaan? Look around what are you doing?

Armaan - loving you putting some of Riddhima's hair behind her ears

Riddhima - someone might see...

Armaan - let them see... I love you and I am not scared of anyone

Anjali - Riddhima?

They both react so fast and move far away from each other

Riddhima - Hun di?

Anjali - want to dance?... common it will be fun common Ridz

Riddhima - later di I am bit tired now

Muskaan - from the dance floor common Anji!!!

Anjali - OK Ridzi as you wish leave Armaan and Ridz, Armaan look bit embrace

Riddhima - I love you and I am not scared of anyone blah blah blah pulling funny faces and making fun of Armaan

Armaan - well... urm because... that Anji and she is my adi garwali

Riddhima - Armaan?

Armaan - Riddhima? OK OK sorry baba, you're my adi and puri garwali pulling Ridz closer

Ridz shyly look down but Armaan slowly lift her chin to the level where their eyes meet. Armaan present Ridz a small box, Ridz took it and open it and found a silver neck less with a heart shape and R written on it.

Armaan - happy anniversary Armaan said cheekily while Ridz looked very sad, shock at the same time

Riddhima - oops... sorry Armaan I forget about it panicking how can I forget our one year... I am so sorry Armaan I didn't have any.....

Armaan - holding Ridz both hands its OK... God gave me a wonderful girl who I will love forever and who is only for me Ridz shyly look down but, but but but this neck less is very expensive so you better give me something special pointing and showing his left cheek as for a kiss

Riddhima - first put this on me, the I will think about it.

Armaan move across and stand behind Ridz and put the neck less on her, they didn't know but Anjali was standing right next to the table and Muskaan and Atul join in shock but Rahul is smiling.

This post has been edited by LaliO: 06 October 2008 - 08:35 PM

[*§targirl^_^]

lol nice :P

[LaLi17]

glad you liked it

[LaLi17]

Part 2

Anjali, Muskaan and Atul are very shock to see Riddhima and Armaan like this close but Rahul was the only one smiling and happy for them because he know the situation.

Atul – Ridz? Looking back and forth at Ridz and Armaan

Muskaan – Armaan, yaar..?!

Anjali – guys, what is going on?

Armaan and Riddhima looked at their fellow interns in shock and Armaan took his hands of the neck less, that the neck less fall off top of Riddhima’s open hands.

Muskaan – Aare, aare... Coming closer to Riddhima wow nice neck less mmm…. R?

Atul – joining in let me see… man Armaan where did you bought this, I want one with A on…

Rahul – you going to wear it?

Atul – no idiot… shyly to Anjali.

Anjali – giving Atul evils and looking at Ridz and

Armaan Ridzi, Armaan… someone tell me…

Armaan – look Anjali, we ar... Looking at Riddhima who is shaking her head as in don’t tell about them

Rahul – urm... Hey Anjali why you get scared, man Armaan… just giving… her a present, yes birthday present Riddhima and Armaan smile in relief

Muskaan – oi, rahoool, Riddhima’s birthday was on like 3 or 4 days ago!! Rahul’s and Armaan’s smile fade away very quickly

Armaan – so… so I didn’t gave her anything on her birthday, we are not romantic like Dr Atul to give fruit baskets patting Atul’s back

Atul – Armaan my brother, thanks but you don’t have to, Ridz not your girlfriend

Anjali – alright, if you say so Armaan… but don’t get too close to my sister. Shall we eat something? I am very hungry.

Atul – running quickly to Anjali’s seat and pulling the chair for her are you? Me too, aare Armaan order something yaar

Everyone sat around the table and ordered their food…

Next morning at Sanjeewani Car Park,

A stylish BMW black car stopped and right next to it a red Mini. Armaan came out from the BMW and Ridz and Anji came out from the Mini.

Armaan – secretly to Riddhima good morning

Anjali – hey Armaan!!

Armaan – walking next to Anjali hey beautiful, hey Riddhima

Riddhima – hey Armaan... You know what, I love you pre….

Anjali – hey what happen to our case on Mr. Bheja? Anjali cut in before Ridz finish the line while entering to the sanjeewani

Armaan – nothing much, did you read the case?

They all in the Locker Room

The locker room is where they spent most of the when they meet each other. There is also a changing room in the locker room where the doctors can get change and etc…

Armaan, Anjali and Riddhima went to their own lockers. While taking their files and lab coat Ridz and Armaan exchange a look

Anjali – well yes, but you got to help me

Atul – entering with singing a song Mein hoon Atul, mein Ridz ki dost and Anjali kip yaar ho… everything went silent I mean aunty ki love hai mein

Armaan – Atul, which aunty you talking about? Your landlord aunty or…?

Atul – Aare... yaar, why you reminding me of her in a morning like this. Going to his locker you know Ridz I have to climb down from the pipe line today

Riddhima – awww… but we should…

Anjali – Armaan, I’ll see you at ward, bye Ridz

Riddhima – bye di Atul also start to walk after Anjali but Ridz stop him by pulling his collar Dr Keerti?

Atul – oh yeh, moving toward the entrance door with Ridz you know at home landlord lady and her Dr Hitler... Both aunties are here to eat my head... Bye Armaan

Riddhima was about to go out and turn around to see Armaan, he was sitting on the bench and sent her a flying kiss, Riddhima felt shy and walk off with talking Atul.

Armaan – to himself Riddhima… suddenly frowning Anjali! And ran out of the locker room

At the same time Muskaan and Rahul came

Muskaan – hey Arma… Rahul start laughing at her OI, what are you laughing at?

Rahul – nothing still laughing a bit

Muskaan – whats your problem, why did I marry you?

Rahul – we are not really married, are we? Thank god for that

Muskaan – what you want to say hun? What do you mean she went up to him and pull him by the shirt

Rahul – Oi, what are you doing he put his hands on Muskaan’s shoulders

They looked into each others eyes and stop irritating each other for while and look into each others eyes few seconds they got closer and closer, but unfortunately a button from Rahul’s shirt came off because Muskaan pulled it too hard.

Rahul – shock Abe Teri toh… he went to the changing room giving Muskaan evils, Muskaan slowly take in what just happened between them two and look around, she strokes her hair and she went to her locker got some files and walk off the locker room.

In the reception Dr Keerti giving Atul, Riddhima and Muskaan their duties

Dr Keerti – Dr Muskaan, your in general ward, Dr Atul…. Rahul came running to the reception and bump in to Atul which made Atul fall on to Muskaan Dr Rahul Garewal… I thought you are well educated man I didn’t know you can’t read the time.

Rahul – no mam, its… he look at Muskaan

Dr Keerti – I am sorry…

Rahul – I am very sorry mam, Muskaan look at Rahul in surprise

Dr Keerti – you better be… Dr Atul

Atul – yes mam?

Dr Keerti – you are in the aids ward

Atul – yes mam

Dr Keerti – Dr Anjali and Dr Armaan?

Riddhima – oh mam they taking care of the Mr. Behja’s case

Dr Keerti – great, and your Dr Riddhima children ward

Riddhima – yes, Dr Keerti

Dr Keerti – Dr Rahul casualty, OK get to work and looking at Rahul no lateness, you guys are dismiss

Atul, Riddhima had to their wards and Rahul also turn to go when Muskaan came and stop him.

Muskaan – hello? Rahul! Why di you do that?

Rahul – confused do what?

Muskaan – that… Rahul gave her strange questioning look why… turning her voice level down didn’t you tell it was me

Rahul – it was… you what?

Muskaan – that you got late because of me

Rahul – when I help you it’s a problem, when I didn’t it’s a problem… ok I’ll just tell Dr Keerti now turning toward to Dr Keerti

Muskaan – OK OK, sorry and… thank you

Rahul – no problem turning turn to her ward which was on the right

Muskaan is walking toward the general ward but was thinking about Rahul, why didn’t he say that the reason was Muskaan that he got late, that’s when Dr Keerti saw her and came in bit fast speed toward her as she was looking for her.

Dr Keerti – Dr Muskaan, Dr Muskaan Chedda… Muskaan?!

Muskaan – what? Oh sorry Dr Keerti…

Dr Keerti – were you lost? Muskaan got confuse day dreaming?

Muskaan – no Mam… it’s just…

Dr Keerti – Muskaan you better take a look at this [i][b]hand in a yellow

Muskaan took it and start reading it, after 2 – 3 pages she look very shocked and her pretty twinkling eyes went big in shock.

[- Edward's Bella -]

Aww haha s ocutee I like Arman & Ridz :clap2:

Great story Lali :hug:

[SAPNASPARKS]

I started reading it, but then stopped because I watch DMG and this is the exact same thing and it's messing with my head. :P I think I will probably read this after DMG is over LOL. That way I won't get confused. :P But you definitely write it very well, shows that you also must be a great DMG fan! :D I love the fact that you can write this story as if you were on the creative team of DMG. Especially the last part about Armaan, that's exactly what he would say, so really really well done! :hug:

[LaLi17]

Thank you sooo much Leeda hun, I will continue it soon

Baby OMG it really a big compliment I got thank you soo much. I am kind of confuse now lol did you mean the story I do is similar to current DMG or it is confusing because it's like same characters and in a hospital? And yes I am a (big) fan of DMG and its look like you too a fan :D and this is my first fanfic so I am really glad, thank u once again.

This post has been edited by LaliO: 09 October 2008 - 11:11 PM

[LaLi17]

he do u guys think i should continue??

[ridhima_017]

hi
when did u carry on the fandic

[LaLi17]

hey its already on like episode 16th but because no body showed an intrest for it in BS i didnt continue.. do u like to read it? if u do send me a pm i'll tell u where the other parts are... =D

[ridhima_017]

LaliO, on Feb 27 2009, 08:05 PM, said:

hey its already on like episode 16th but because no body showed an intrest for it in BS i didnt continue.. do u like to read it? if u do send me a pm i'll tell u where the other parts are... =D

hi
i really like it so plz update it plz plz
do u knw where is other fanfic in this webside plz tell me

[{Rylie.Von.Soulz}]

Ahahaha this is cute man... U shuld continue...